My Aspiration
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Stillness at sunset.
No peace in my heart
Stark reminders of what I miss.
Space of warmth and causeless joy.
Fire of angels, a playful kiss.
I see you when I close my eyes.
And feel your breath against my skin
Take me home inside your heart.
And forever hold me in your wings.
My thread of gold.
Sees storms and shadows.
Tear me open and let me die.
Spinning tunnells, abyss in darkness,
Dare I brave my heart to try.
Closed and chained
I can bear no more.
I grasp for where I used to lie.
Make the tunnells gold with light
And lead me back to your side.
I see you when I close my eyes.
And feel your breath against my skin
Take me home inside your heart.
And forever hold me in your wings.
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that is true melancholic poetry
i like the flighty ambiance of this one. very atmospheric. thanks for sharing :D
VioletSun, I can still draw tears reading this piece even though I wrote it!
gt and Cris, thanks for popping in. I'm a hopeless melancholic romantic under this hard exterior.
I love it. It's melancholy, yes, but soothing at the same time because of the beats and sounds in each line. This is a great soft read a loud.
What beautiful words you have wrought. Elegant and full of passion and fire; those things you miss, and lead me back to your side. so poignant. thanks
"I grasp for where I used to lie"and "Forever hold me in your wings" as my silly eyes well up and I feel your pain...Very well expressed my dear Lady...G-Ma :O) Hugs & Peace
Frieda, CC and GMa.Thank you for sharing this poem with me.
Beautiful Really beautuful. If I read it a few times. Will it do instead of isis?? -)
Thanks Phyllis for dropping by.
So much pain that it's infective.
thanks for sharing.
Ahhh Benson, you see the depth.
I loved this one, especially the line, 'Dare I brave my heart to try'. Thank you.
Neat poem, it could be sung into a great song also. I hope Love listens to you. Well done. Cheers.
I'd love to hear it to music, that would be awesome. Thanks guys for dropping in.
I loved this.....grinning heart! Thanks! :)
Thankyou Tom.
Sigh...I apologize, I just woke up. But all I can say is..delicious.
G|M
Thanks GM
Quite lovely. Thanks for sharing this with all of us.
It made me still and silent for awhile and placed me in a thoughtful mood. Beautiful poem... many thanks. love and light,
Michelle
Glad it touched your day. Thankyou for sharing.
nice one yaar!
you wrote it on your own or you copied it from some where else. if you had written it manually then it is really a great way of explanation.
feel free to comment me back so that i can also do the same for you too
Thanks for visiting swathin2. It's definitely my own piece and was written while I was doing meditation practices.
I've only read a few of your blogs, but you are very talented and seem to possess a true self-awareness. Nice poem, very touching.
lovely free flowing.... very nice
Thankyou poetlorraine.
Sobering, even heart wrenching, I will come to you when I need the release of a good cry, sometimes it hurts so much the tears won't come, ahh the poetic release...you are a talent and a word painter...gracious landings...
Deborah-Lynn, thank you for your beautiful words. You managed to bring a tear this end. This poem is very special and is wonderful when it touches people too.
you have great inspiration through your poem. It touching my heart.
Your mystic perspective is an enchanting respite in this day of chaos...
Thanks, lou
Thankyou Ioua, I'm pleased you were enchanted.
nice poetry...like it^^
I liked this. I write poetry myself, but yours got more play. I only posted one here, about taking a walk with Edgar Allen Poe, and it got the fewest reads of anything I've written. The response here encourages me. Maybe I'll drop in another one.
Thankyou joyceann.
Hi Jewels.. There is nothing that I could add beyond what the masters before have said above except:
Thank You.
Appreciate your words Pearldiver. I personally love this piece, it means a lot.
..your poetic aspirations are my inspirations ......your words flow like liquid honey.
I remember like yesterday what inspired me to write this piece. And it can still bring tears! Thank you so much for your kind words epigramman.
Great poetry! Thank you Ma'am! There's that Epi Dude!
Hi Micky Dee, glad you came by. Yes Epi gets around!
Hi Jewels, I can imagine this poem set to music.
I would love that to happen Debby. One day maybe!
Wonderful! You are a great poet.
Jewels, enjoyable read. Great imagery having METAPHYSICAL dimensions, fascinating. Thanks for the share. Voted Up AWESOME!!
Appreciate your feedback. Thank you for visiting my poetry.
VioletSun Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago
Jewels: Right now my heart is aching as I read your poem. Sigh, it was a beautiful read. The words, "take me home inside your heart" is touching.