A Waltz With The Gods
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I danced in the fire
And merged into ecstasy.
I found my cosmic lover
And we morphed into worlds.
Flying as ether,
A flame from space to space.
She died and found herself.
And we danced in the Sun.
I became the fire
And melted again and again,
And made love to the Sun
And became the Sun.
She awoke from death filled.
And accepted the smallness of the ant.
Humbled.
Mother of the Light protect my way,
So I may dance with the Sun always.
Fire as strength. Fierce.
And she danced with her cosmic lover.
Life.
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i like the "into and out of" imagery. divine. thanks for sharing :D
goldentoad - that was exactly the feeling, was a special experience, glad you could take the trip with me.
Cris A - thanks so much for visiting.
"Mother of the Light protect my way, So I may dance with the Sun always."
Those were my favorite lines. Like a prayer spoken by any age.
What were you smoking? left handed cigarettes? to mkae love like that I would fly. thanks
Hmmm. Have a nice love affair, did we? I know the feeling, when love, closeness, and yes, sex, seem to lift us to a higher plane, a different level of existence. Thanks for sharing your poem and your emotion.
Feelings now gone from my life...but yahooo for those that still can share and feel...G-Ma :O) Hugs & Peace
Christoph. Yes.
G_ma, hugs back to you.
Opening up and bravely flinging oneself into it all. Dancing with the sun. Vulnerability is a strength.
Vulnerability is a strength, hard at times, boy can it be hard!
I'm very glad you posted this in the April Poetry forum. Thanks for sharing. Lovely it is.
Freaking awesome, yet again...
"
I found my cosmic lover
And we morphed into worlds.
Flying as ether,
A flame from space to space."
Great use of pix! And this reminds me of a video..
Negasonic Teenage Warhead by Monster Magnet
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyokRzdDQ9A
Sincerely,
G|M
Thanks RK, appreciated.
GM, I checked the vid, I could relate to the imagery at the end particularly. Thanks for your kind words.
Hi astrology expert. Cool poem!
Came across your fine words courtesy of another hubber. goldentoad put it quite well. I look forward to reading more of your hubs.
Thankyou RedElf, glad you came to visit.
I would have to agree with Toad and RedElf...read it twice...great imagery
That was awesome, darn I just love putting my nose into some great poetry
Enelle, thankyou so much.
BP - you are welcome anytime..
No seriously Jewels, name your bribing sum that you offered God for such exquisite ecstasy! Simply loved the way your words glided over raw passion! It was just like water above fire!
Simply Amazing!
*notes down Jewels name in her notebook*
jewels,you were the first to welcome me which sets you on a pedestal in my mind.you wouldn't believe the intellectual level of the people in our town.you may not remember but we were commenting on the difference and function of the spirit and soul.that was my first contribution to H P.jewels,your comment on what i said made me whole again and confirmed that i am not stupid or deluded into thinking I"m inteligent.it was just one word "nice",i don't no how you do it but i am committed to you as a true bodhisattva...peace...
Naz, I'm blushing.
Hey cheaptrick, it must be my magnetism :D And I waltz with the gods, that helps! LOL.
Really amusing, an artistic and vague poem. I enjoyed every word!
Holy smokes! This is beyond words. In fact, I have to stop typing. I can't do a comment justice.
Glad you both enjoyed my words. I loved the space if came from.
I was reminded of the opening of Barbarella. Great Job!
Now I'm going to have to know the opening of Barbarella!
I'd say this is one of those subtle body tactile escapades of exquisite enchantment...
It certainly was Ioua. Beautifully imprinted.
I am often guilty
of worshipping the sun,
becoming a burnt offering
drenched in oils,
and when I am splayed
like bacon on the beach,
and her warm fingers
massage all of my flesh,
I drift into a paradise
unlike anything felt daily
in the humdrum of life...
she carries me away,
back to my fondest moments
that fate granted me,
my first kiss, just as warm
and invigorating,
or my mothers arms,
though she is long since
passed on beyond the
realm of the sun,
and so many lazy days
as a child playing
make believe under
her watchful gaze.
I like to walk in the rain,
and feel nature wash me
in it's essence,
I have been known to lie
in a babbling brook and
just listen to its sweet song,
I have even rolled naked
in the snow and then plunged
into a warmth similiar to
the suns in a hot tub,
but there is nothing like
a day on the beach,
basking in her heavenly face.
Great hub...
let's go dancing together
sometime on two distant shores
and remember this comment
as we giggle at the beauty
of it all~~~MFB III
I feel swooned all of a sudden. Smiling ear to ear from the warmth of your words. That was fun MFB.
your wonderful sense of poetic timing and eloquent wording reminds me of a Strauss waltz - and a beautiful thing that is!
A lovely compliment, thankyou so much epigramman. I love Strauss waltzes.
epigramman wrote via fan mail: "you are such a lovely writer ... so believe me the pleasure is all mine!
And I will play (On the) Beautiful Blue Danube - just for you!"
I had to add it. As I read back through everyone's comments, this is proof the WWW can be an amazing space. Heartness.
.... I'm originally from Mars so I could handle this!!!
I can say an alien visited. :D
Beautiful and passionate poem, Jewels, thank you...
Amazing description...thank you for the trip to the sun and the story of love...
Thankyou Tatjana and Amy, very pleased you dropped in.
A cosmic lover is better than none! I need to look up! Great write.
Thanks Micky Dee. Upward and inward - the only way to fly.
goldentoad 3 years ago
I felt I was floating in space with some passionate lovers tangled up in a never ending affair